Aboriginal Poem Analysis – The Aboriginal Cricketer

February 28, 2008 at 8:43 pm (Supplementary Material)

 Les Murray

Mid-9th century

Good-looking young man

in your Crimean shirt

with your willow shield
up, as if to face spears,

you’re inside their men’s Law,

one church they do obey;

they’ll remember you were here.
Keep fending off their casts.

Don’t come out of character.

Like you they suspect

idiosyncrasy of witchcraft.

Above all, don’t get out

too easily, and have to leave here

where all missiles are just leather
and come from one direction.

Keep it noble. Keep it light.

This is an aboriginal poem that talks an aboriginal cricketer. Literally this is talking about a batsman who faces a cricket ball. Metaphorically this poem talks about how we should face our fears. It also tells us to face them with confidence.

In the last sentence, the author tells us to ‘keep it noble. Keep it Light’ I think this means that we should keep it simple and confront them one at a time.

This poem is structured with four paragraphs, four lines on each. There is no rhyming scheme and the author has chosen to use short sentences to let us focus on the main point.

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Journal 7

February 28, 2008 at 1:43 pm (Social Studies -)

The beatitudes are a guidline to teach you how to live your life. It is also wirtten in the scriptures.

The beatitudes give us a bigger understanding of how we should live. Its purpose also gives us a guideline to the rewards we may get if we follow them correctly.

‘Blessed are they who hunger and thirst for righteousness’ was put into practice when Jesus gave 100 people fish and bread for food.

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Science – Journal 3

February 28, 2008 at 11:46 am (science - periodic table)

Today one of our members, Saarthak has broken his arm. This means that we will need to get his contact details for further progression in our project. Some small changes will be made but the majority of the board game will stay the same.

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Preamble Cover Letter

February 27, 2008 at 8:48 pm (Social Studies -, Supplementary Material)

Preamble Cover Letter

2 Darcy Road, Westmead

Sydney, New South Wales

2145

 

Parliament House
Canberra
ACT 2600
Australia

25/2/08

RE: Austender Preamble

Dear Senator,

 

We are a group from Parramatta Marist High School and have chosen to write a preamble about the admissions for the amendment of the preamble to the constitution to include indigenous Australians. Our names are Scott Chau, Jonathan Saad, James Harb, Mitch Burt and Jamie Twal. We believe that a preamble is necessary so that we may fill the needs of Australian aboriginals and make an official apology to them.

This document contains reasons and evidence to show how the Aboriginals were treated unfairly and why we believe that a change needs to be made. Many people are still affected by the Stolen Generation and find it hard to reconcile and forgive. Discrimination is still a big factor in todays society. Not only indigenous people but those from all culture have faced racial problems. This has caused the steep deficiency of the health of Aboriginals. Diabetes, hepatitis and alcohol are only a few of the problems that aboriginals become vulnerable to in their daily lives.

In conclusion, we think that not enough has been done. By simply apologizing we are not doing enough. We, students of Parramatta Marist believe that Aboriginals should be treated equally among us. We wish that one day, all aboriginals will be treated fairly and recognition among today’s society. Forgiveness and reconciliation is hard but we can only change that if we show the initiative to do so first.

 

 Yours Sincerely,

Year 9 of Parramatta Marist High.

Scott Chau, Jonathan Saad, Mitch Burt, James Harb and Jamie Twal.

 

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CLASS criteria 9.3-9.4

February 21, 2008 at 10:48 am (IST-CST - Inspiring People of faith)

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Group Minutes of a Meeting

February 21, 2008 at 10:11 am (IST-CST - Inspiring People of faith)

mintutes-meeting-2.doc 12 Tuesday 2008

meeting_minutes-3.doc February 19, 2008

meeting_minutes-4.doc February 19, 2008

meeting_minutes_5.doc February 19, 2008

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Science – Journal 2

February 21, 2008 at 9:19 am (science - periodic table)

Today, we have brainstormed ideas. Our group will be doing a board game. I have started designing the board game and developing ideas.

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Science – Journal 1

February 21, 2008 at 9:17 am (science - periodic table)

Today we were allocated our groups. I we started thinking up for ideas and developing our projects. I think we will do good if we all work together and finish deadlines before the due date.

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Group Criteria

February 19, 2008 at 10:26 am (IST-CST - Inspiring People of faith)

  1. The nominee for marist of the year award should include the following things:
  2. Must be very faithful
  3. Must have made commitments to the community and charities
  4. Must be part of the marist community
  5. Maybe be deaceased or alive
  6. Must have helped or sponsered a charity or a poor family
  7. Can be of any culture or race
  8. Must be genorous and kind
  9. Must have a good repuatation
  10. Must be well known around the country or even world
  11. Can be a student still attending hifh school
  12. Can have a very big or small influence on people.
  13. Shows faith and humbleness
  14. shows forgiveness
  15. honest and dedicated

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IST CST-journal 6

February 18, 2008 at 10:06 pm (IST-CST - Inspiring People of faith)

I think that the picture under entry 6 on http://pmonline.parramarist.nsw.edu.au/course/view.php?id=2 is about the battle or conflict between inspiring people and inspiriing people of faith.

I think Andrew Johns has courage, wisdom, strength, perseverance and persistence.

Mother Theresa has qualities of love, passion, care, patience and forigveness.
I think that the difference between inspiring people and inspiring people of faith is that the people of faith are doing it not only for themselves. They are inspired by religious people and have chosen to follow them.

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